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Acting on the edit

What should you do after a developmental edit?

After a developmental edit, do not revise from page one immediately. Read the full feedback, wait long enough to separate reaction from judgment, then translate comments into a small set of manuscript decisions. Confirm the diagnosis against passages, group related notes under root problems, and order the work from structural changes to local changes. Decide what you accept, reject, or need to test. Only begin line and copy work after the revised manuscript holds together as a complete book.

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Build a decision ledger

For each major note, record the claimed reader problem, the supporting passages, your decision, and the chapters affected. This prevents a large report from becoming an unstructured to-do list.

Mark disagreements explicitly. You do not need to accept a prescription to learn from the reaction that produced it.

Revise in dependency order

Start with cuts, additions, reordering, point-of-view changes, argument sequence, and character causality. Then repair continuity and pacing. Work on lines after those decisions settle.

Revisit the opening after finishing structural revision because the book's real promise may now be clearer.

Close the loop

Reread the complete manuscript, not only changed chapters. Check that setups still pay off, facts remain consistent, and cuts have not removed necessary context.

In Wordsmith, the developmental letter and chapter work remain connected. Use Fred to discuss a suggestion, accept it, reject it, or ask how it relates to the whole-book diagnosis.

Frequently asked questions

Should I respond to every comment?

No. Resolve every material diagnosis, but several comments may share one root cause and one revision decision.

What if I disagree with the edit?

Check the evidence and reader effect. You can reject the proposed fix while addressing the underlying confusion or loss of momentum in another way.

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